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Tuesday, 25 October 2011

Out of the blue.

I had been running in circles,
They seemed to never end.
But i took charge, and
Now i am walking ahead.
Leaving all the tears, 
Leaving all the sorrow behind.
Because i have become strong,
Stronger then you will ever be.
And while i go, you can watch.
I will reach the top. 

So, i wrote this.. ( quite obvious? :P ) And yeah I felt like being creative at 11:40 in the night after a day of almost drinking an acid and well doing random stuff.. 

Hope you guys like it! 

P.s i had no idea what to name it.. That's why i named it ''Out of the blue." 

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8 comments:

  1. Misterio Vida26 October 2011 at 00:07

    oh come on...you are writing at such a young age and i dont know what will you write when you reach my age...made me sad as i cannot write a single line of poetry :(

    i hope you will keep writing and posting so that we can read your lovely poems and prose ..out of the blue :)

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  2. S. Mahnoor Shah26 October 2011 at 07:51

    Well i am happy you thought it was good! :D
    And ahh.. I have no idea what to say to that..... But i have read what you post! And its like really really good!
    And i will hopefully post more.. If i come up with some :)

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  3. Misterio Vida26 October 2011 at 07:54

    naw you really write so well..in this age of facebook and sms, there are only a few people who can or want to write proper spellings let alone poetry and that too at your age... so you should write and write and write and then some people will like your writings and some will hate but it should not dis heart you :)

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  4. ♥●• İzdihër •●♥27 October 2011 at 06:01

    This is so beautiful .best of luck for future You are inspiring and talented.


    Follow back.

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  5. Faraz Ezazi27 October 2011 at 06:55

    It was a good piece of poetry.
    I have no idea about how to write a piece of poetry. So Good Luck And

    Keep posting

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  6. S. Mahnoor Shah27 October 2011 at 08:03

    Thank you! :D

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